BREATHE | Poetry – am I to ugly to be loved [ PART 1 ]

First and foremost, I’ll like to thank everyone for the love and support and the different opportunities that are coming my way, I love you xx
With that being said – Welcome back 🙂 how are you doing?
Back in the day, I used to write poems;  poems that will come straight from my dome… I’ll write when I’m bored, happy, sad etc and I’ll send to them to friends and my crush at the time lol!! I would say writing poems helped me express how I felt at the particular time.

The last poem I wrote was in 2015.

The majority of people knew I wrote poems, just for fun. I never did spoken word, but I’ll always listen to it. I don’t really have the ‘voice’ in my opinion to execute my poems, but I’ll happily write them lol.

Here is a recent poem created called ‘Breathe’

P.S. Yes, I was down and upset when I wrote it. But, let me know what you think.


BREATHE – Transcript 
Inhale: Exhale
I’m governed by modern society views of…
How I should react to certain situations that conform my views.
I often wonder.. why
Why, do I.. sigh
inhale: exhale
that never stops ticking,
with the constant click, from past to the present
I find myself here…
page after page.. after page
Hearts on fire
Exposing parts unseen
Beneath the surfaces
but still, like the sun,
I’ll rise.
- Ness - 14:03:2018
Till next Wednesday at 6PM, I bid you adieu! 🙂
Ness xo

One thought on “BREATHE | Poetry – am I to ugly to be loved [ PART 1 ]

  1. I think it is amazing that you write poems and you should continue to write them.

    Very interesting topic/story for your poem. I can see that it came straight from the heart.

    Just remember this, if Jesus died and accepted you, as long as you stay in him and remain in him, you can never be truly rejected.

    “For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?”

    You are beautiful Vanessa. Stop searching for validation from people and society. You know that your a gift from God.

    Keep doing what you’re doing Vanessa.

    Liked by 1 person

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