BREATHE | Poetry – am I to ugly to be loved [ PART 1 ]

BREATHE | Poetry  – am I to ugly to be loved [ PART 1 ]
First and foremost, I’ll like to thank everyone for the love and support and the different opportunities that are coming my way, I love you xx
With that being said – Welcome back 🙂 how are you doing?
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Back in the day, I used to write poems;  poems that will come straight from my dome… I’ll write when I’m bored, happy, sad etc and I’ll send to them to friends and my crush at the time lol!! I would say writing poems helped me express how I felt at the particular time.

The last poem I wrote was in 2015.

The majority of people knew I wrote poems, just for fun. I never did spoken word, but I’ll always listen to it. I don’t really have the ‘voice’ in my opinion to execute my poems, but I’ll happily write them lol.

Here is a recent poem created called ‘Breathe’

breathe
P.S. Yes, I was down and upset when I wrote it. But, let me know what you think.

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BREATHE – Transcript 
Inhale: Exhale
Breathe.
I’m governed by modern society views of…
beauty
How I should react to certain situations that conform my views.
I often wonder.. why
Why, do I.. sigh
inhale: exhale
tick…tock
that never stops ticking,
with the constant click, from past to the present
breathe.
I find myself here…
page after page.. after page
Hearts on fire
Exposing parts unseen
Beneath the surfaces
inhale>exhale
but still, like the sun,
I’ll rise.
breathe.
- Ness - 14:03:2018
Till next Wednesday at 6PM, I bid you adieu! 🙂

Ness xo

 

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A quality of beauty and intensity of emotion regarded as characteristic of poems.

A quality of beauty and intensity of emotion regarded as characteristic of poems.

Dear Notebook,

Everything will be ok; be strong, believe.

Poetry.  The expression of feelings and ideas is given intensity by the use of distinctive style and rhythm;

Poetry, was an outlet method for me as I always kept things in.

There are so many reasons why I’m in love with poetry and why I used to write poetry. Writing, more so typing lol poetry gave me a place to get some of my thoughts, my fears etc out of my head, and onto paper or my phone!!

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